If you consider my quality suits for this position, you can contact me by phone number 0909023548 at any time convenient for you so as to discuss more concrete about my competence.--->I wonder whether you can contact me through my mobile phone if my qualification is suitable for the position? I look forwards to an interview at your office for further discussion about my competence. Thank you very much for your time and consideration. Sincerely yours, kí tên...

câu này ở trên nói rồi mà:( lặp ý!!! With my ability, I believe that I can satisfy your inquire for this position-->nối lại với câu dưới thì cũng tạm được-->With my ability, I believe that I can satisfy your inquire for this position. This position you give me not only help me to work in my favorite field, suit with my capability also give me a chance to expand and raise my specialist knowledge--->Therefore, I believe that my qualifications will meet the requirements for this position, which not only gives me an precious opportunty to work in my favorite field, but also enriches my specialized knowledge(kiến thức chuyên ngành)

Simultaneously, I never stop investigate, study in order to find the best way to solve my work quickly and easy in the future-->nhớ to stop Ving (ko làm nữa)-->I've never stopped investigating, searching and learning the best ways to finish/do my works thoroughly/efficiently;... so that I (sao ko có chủ ngữ) can read professional/specialized materials/documents(tài liệu chuyên ngành), communicate well through email or directly with foreigners, use conversantly computer (sử dụng thành thạo máy tính-->đã xài to use rồi mà) and have an ambitious, enthusiastic and scrupulous passion(thiếu noun) in business-->hoặc chuyển về dạng danh từ của mấy tính từ trên

cảm ơn bạn nha :X

practicing at Schenker Vietnam Limited Company in 4 months at Sea Import Department and work directly in this department process-->ko coherent, trên xài HTHT, mà dây là xài Ving-->as well as (have) practiced...and worked; good spirit team work, always combine well with all departments and achieve success together-->ko thống nhất, đoạn thì person, dưới thì good spirit này nọ-->a contributive teammember who always well cooperate/collaborate with other departments and contribute great efforts to the mutual success (of the company/department)

experience 4 months -->4 month experience/ practicing industrious and effective-->practicing industriously and effectively/ at your company-->in/for your company; that I will be an excellent staff for the position Sales Executive-->I believe my qualifications will be suitable/fit with the Sales Executive position; at August-->in August; prepared for myself a lot of useful knowledge from-->câu này sai, to prepare sthing for sthing-->I have learnt a lot of meaningful/significant/great experience from my part-time job as an cooperate staff(mình ko rõ) for ABC company...

To have an inquiring mind and quickly hold the business along with experience 4 months practicing industrious and effective in Sea Import territory, I believe that I can acquire and begin to work immediately for conducting high result at your company. Through your advertisement at www.vietnamworks.com I believe that I will be an excellent staff for the position Sales Executive. I have graduated from College Of Foreign Economic Relations at August. However, I prepared for myself a lot of useful knowledge from my cooperate as a salesman with Vietnam Data and Communication Company area II as well as practicing at Schenker Vietnam Limited Company in 4 months at Sea Import Department and work directly in this department process. I am a responsible person, good spirit team work, always combine well with all departments and achieve success together. Simultaneously, I never stop investigate, study in order to find the best way to solve my work quickly and easy in the future. Beside that, I am good at English so that can read specialty material, communicate through email or directly with foreigner, use conversant with computer and have an ambitious, enthusiastic and scrupulous in business. With my ability, I believe that I can satisfy your inquire for this position. This position you give me not only help me to work in my favorite field, suit with my capability also give me a chance to expand and raise my specialist knowledge. Besides, this is a big opportunity to work in a professional and dynamic environment. I have enclosed my CV and relevant degrees in this letter. If you consider my quality suits for this position, you can contact me by phone number 0909023548 at any time convenient for you so as to discuss more concrete about my competence. Thanks for setting your time to read my record and aspiration.