This is the fifth week that my group has been working together: Bạn xem lại vì nó mâu thuẫn với topic sentence của bạn: 5 tuần/ 1 tuần (This week is an amazing week). Nên có câu chuyển mạch (transition sentence) giữa 2 ý: đã cùng làm việc 5 tuần/ tuần này là thú vị nhất.

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This week is an amazing week that I have ever had, it helped me to understand how to work in a group and look after each other. Bạn ơi, topic sentence của mình là câu này đc ko vậy? Thx bạn :)

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Đầu đoạn văn nên có phần dẫn nhập (introduction). Bài của bạn chưa có phần này. Phần còn lại: Our group has had a chance to practice setting up a restaurant, carrying plates and serving customers in a professional way...

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Blog 2: Inter-personal relationships In our Food and Beverage Practical class this week, my group and I have a chance to practice of how to set up a restaurant, carry plates and how to serve guests when they come to the restaurant in a professional way. This is the fifth week that my group has been working together, therefore, there is no such thing call language barrier when we communicate to others. I’m so glad when we can work as a team so well, everybody helps each other. I still remember that me and Erik was pretended as guests, while Yessica was a waitress and had to serve, when she forgot to bring our drinks before bring out the food, we reminded her about each step in serving customer. Even though our friendship were built up slowly due to different personalities, cultural, etc. Few weeks ago, I was only talking to Nova, my lovely friend from China, until this week, I am starting talk to other people in my group, although it was some greeting when we first met. It made me so happy of how friendly and enthusiasm my friends are. Hopefully, our friendship will get better Food and Beverage Practical class next week.

Cám ơn bạn trước nhé :)