Thank you for your encouragement, I received IELTS result last week. I am sending you its score to seek your acceptance to start the Financial Planning course in May 2011 without taking …..
As I mentioned ( nếu là trao đổi với người này qua email trước đó thì viết tiếp IN PREVIOUS EMAIL(S), còn nếu bạn ko muốn nhấn mạnh đã trao đổi qua phương tiện nào thì dùng BEFORE), While waiting for my visa, I will keep improving my English in order to facilitate my study in Toronto.
Please advise on my case and I would be grateful if I could receive your letter by May 2011.
Highly appreciate your kind assistance.
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