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    Đã gửi cách đây 5519 ngày
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    Các bác ơi, mình viết một đoạn post lên rum chat, nhưng có nhiều lỗi qúa, các bác giúp mình chỉ ra những lỗi trong đoạn mình viết nhé, hix, biết là có nhiều lỗi mà không biết chỗ nào, hix, giúp mình nhé: "Most of world-famous scientists and inventions were found in last century or earlier when there have no high technology such as computers, projectors or telephone. At that time, learning and teaching style are major depended on creation of student and teacher. Showing the ideas effectively by simple description ways or materials is one of advantage that increases student’s creation. By the traditional way, to get the knowledge easier, student has to contact directly to their teacher very often at class or home, which also improved dynamics and communication skill for student much. Obviously, in the pass, teaching and learning style bring up a lot of advantages in order to all-round develop a person." Thanks tất cả các bác.

    Đã gửi cách đây 5522 ngày
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    Các bác ơi, giúp mình correct lỗi và cách dùng từ trong đoạn này nhé: "There is no doubt to say that advertising brings up a lot of inconveniences for our lives. Many advertising boards raise everywhere in the streets that no well organization is cause of visibility reduction on road. Pedestrian are also attached easily by attractive advertisement which is the main reason for many accidents in the city. In addition, contend of advertising is also a worth problem need to be considered since it directly impact to our daily basic. In the same kind of product, may have many type of advertisements, some of them do not show the real quality of product, this make customers confused and don’t know what is product they really want to buy. Furthermore, developments of television and internet technology are great environment for advertisement get into our lives intensively. It is very uncomfortable every time turn on TV or get in the internet we have to consume advertising appeared which really annoyed us. Some people, however, they recognized an immensely advantages of advertising." Thanks các bác :)

    Đã gửi cách đây 5522 ngày
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    Các bác ơi, giúp mình correct lỗi và cách dùng từ trong đoạn này nhé: "There is no doubt to say that advertising brings up a lot of inconveniences for our lives. Many advertising boards raise everywhere in the streets that no well organization is cause of visibility reduction on road. Pedestrian are also attached easily by attractive advertisement which is the main reason for many accidents in the city. In addition, contend of advertising is also a worth problem need to be considered since it directly impact to our daily basic. In the same kind of product, may have many type of advertisements, some of them do not show the real quality of product, this make customers confused and don’t know what is product they really want to buy. Furthermore, developments of television and internet technology are great environment for advertisement get into our lives intensively. It is very uncomfortable every time turn on TV or get in the internet we have to consume advertising appeared which really annoyed us. Some people, however, they recognized an immensely advantages of advertising." Thanks các bác :)

    Đã gửi cách đây 5522 ngày
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    Thanks Hãi Hùng :D, giờ mình mới biết tiện ích này :)

    Đã gửi cách đây 5522 ngày
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    Ý mình là bạn post vào profile này nè, rồi kêu gọi mọi người vào giúp

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