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cậu xem hộ tớ bài này xem sao nhen: Some people will give up if they are bored or have difficulty during their life. For me, “never, never give up” - an ordinary saying, but it is not only my favorite saying but also my great encouragement. Anyone might not reach their goals without showing sufficient enthusiasm. I am an enthusiastic girl and want to complete all my work without pause. I never give up. And it encouraged me much when I intended to give up. From my case, I wanted to set up a volunteer team. But none of some close friends seemed to be interested in my idea or want to join with me. I was frustrated then but I told myself not to give up. I thought that there must be some people who have the same idea with me. As a result, when I came up with a different approach which was posting my ideas on social websites, I was astonished upon figuring out that a lot of people shared the same idea with me. Now, we joint together in one team and started our volunteer work. After all, speaking from my above experience, I would have failed if I had not pushed myself strong enough to pursue my target.

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“Never, never give up” – an ordinary saying, but for me, it is not only my favorite saying but also my great encouragement. Anyone might not reach their goals by not showing sufficient enthusiasm. From my case, I wanted to set up a volunteer team. So, I asked some close friends whether they would like to join or not – phải có or not . But none of them seemed to be interested in my idea. I was down/frustrated at first but I told myself not to give up. Shortly after that, I realized that my invitation was just for a few people and I literally did not clarify my idea for them. Next time, I came up with a different approach hay hơn vì mình muốn giới thiệu ý kiến cho người khác/ way cũng dc which was posting my ideas on social websites as well as texting all of my friends. It came as surprise to me that there were still people having the same idea- câu này lấy câu tớ sửa đi. Now, I eventually had my own team. After all, speaking from my above experience, I would have failed if I had not pushed myself strong enough to pursue my target.

“Never, never give up” – ‘’’an ordinary saying’’’, but for me, it is not only my favorite saying but also my great encouragement. Anyone might not reach their goals by not showing sufficient enthusiasm. From my case, I wanted to set up a volunteer team. So, I asked some close friend’’’s’’’ whether they would like to ‘’’join or not – phải có or not’’’ . But none of them seemed to be interested in my idea. I was ‘’’down/frustrated at first’’’ but ‘’’I told myself not to give up’’’. Shortly after that, I realized that my invitation was just for a few people and I literally did not clarify my idea for them. Next time, I came up with a different ‘’’approach hay hơn vì mình muốn giới thiệu ý kiến cho người khác/ way cũng ok’’’ which was posting my ideas on social websites as well as texting all of my friends. ‘’’It came as surprise to me that there were still people having the same idea- câu này lấy câu tớ sửa đi’’’. Now, I eventually had my own team. After all, speaking from my above experience, I would have failed if I had ‘’’not pushed myself strong enough’’’ to pursue my target.

cậu thấy bài này thế nào: “Never, never give up”. In fact, it was such an ordinary saying, but for me, it is not only my favorite saying but also my great encouragement. Anyone might not reach their goals by not showing sufficient enthusiasm. From my case, I wanted to set up a volunteer team. So, I asked some close friend whether they would like to join in. But none of them seemed to be interested in my idea. I was discouraged but “never, never give up”. Shortly after that, I realized that my invitation was just for a few people and I literally did not clarify my idea for them. Next time, I came up with a different way which was posting my ideas on social websites as well as texting all of my friends. It came as surprise to me that there were still people having the same idea. Now, I eventually had my own team. After all, speaking from my above experience, I would have failed if I had not been pushed me forward enough to pursue my target.

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Success is the ability to go from one failure to one another with no loss of enthusiasm” - said Sir Winston Churchill. Not only is it my favorite saying, I also gain a valuable experience. Anyone might not reach their goals by not showing sufficient enthusiasm. You are considered as a loser once you are incapable of getting over failure. However, if you aim at something, strive for it, light at the tunnel will be visible for you. From my case, I wanted to set up a volunteer team then asked my friends whether they would like to join or not and still, none of them seemed to be interested in my idea. Shortly after that, I realized that my invitation was just for a few people and I literally did not clarify my idea for them. Next time, I came up with a different approach which was posting my idea on social websites as well as texting all of my friends. I astonished upon figuring out that a lot of people shared the same idea with me. Now, I eventually had my own team. After all, speaking from my above experience, I would have failed if I had not been enthusiastic enough to pursue my target.

tớ muốn check TA. ĐOạn tớ mới làm nè: “Success is the ability to go from one failure to one another with no loss of enthusiasm” - Sir Winston Churchill said. It is not only my favorite saying but also my experience. Without enthusiasm, anyone should have failed. Once you find no way to get over the failure, you really fail. But if you really want something, work hard and never give up, you will find a way. I really wanted to form a volunteer team. So, I asked some close friend whether they would like to join in. But most of them refused. Then I realized that the number of people I asked was about 4 or 5, I hadn’t told a clear firm purpose couldn’t answer all my friends’ concern. Next time, I had changed my way to show my ideas by posting them on my school’s forum, sending to all my friends through Facebook, Yahoo Messenger and cell phone. I was surprised that there were still people having the same idea. And now, I have my own team. If I wasn’t enthusiastic, I would fail. People should try, fail, and your result is success.

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“Success is the ability to go from one failure to one another with no loss of enthusiasm” - Sir Winston Churchill said. It is not only my favorite saying but also my experience. Failure doesn’t mean there is no goal, or no option. Once in an English test, it came as surprise that I got 7.2 marks – the second last in my class. I couldn’t sit down under that marks and began to recognize that resulted from my laziness, subjectiveness. Looking at my fault, I decided to correct them by previewing my new lessons, doing more English exercises and answering all my teacher’s questions. Never give up. The next test, I attained 9.2 marks – the second. Once I wanted to disseminate a new plan for my volunteer group to the supporters. Yet, I failed. They not only disliked hearing but also felt very angry. I was very discouraged and reproached them. Some senior helped me realize that I was too lazy to take a clear note before disseminating, inasmuch as I repeated so much that made them uncomfortable; additionally, I wasn’t light-hearted like before. Since then I changed my way to discuss with them and succeeded. If I wasn’t enthusiastic, I would fail. But instead of being overwhelmed by failure, I must be of sound mind and accept it, because failure can be a positive experience.