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“Never, never give up” – an ordinary saying, but for me, it is not only my favorite saying but also my great encouragement. Anyone might not reach their goals by not showing sufficient enthusiasm. From my case, I wanted to set up a volunteer team. So, I asked some close friends whether they would like to join or not – phải có or not . But none of them seemed to be interested in my idea. I was down/frustrated at first but I told myself not to give up. Shortly after that, I realized that my invitation was just for a few people and I literally did not clarify my idea for them. Next time, I came up with a different approach hay hơn vì mình muốn giới thiệu ý kiến cho người khác/ way cũng dc which was posting my ideas on social websites as well as texting all of my friends. It came as surprise to me that there were still people having the same idea- câu này lấy câu tớ sửa đi. Now, I eventually had my own team. After all, speaking from my above experience, I would have failed if I had not pushed myself strong enough to pursue my target.

“Never, never give up” – ‘’’an ordinary saying’’’, but for me, it is not only my favorite saying but also my great encouragement. Anyone might not reach their goals by not showing sufficient enthusiasm. From my case, I wanted to set up a volunteer team. So, I asked some close friend’’’s’’’ whether they would like to ‘’’join or not – phải có or not’’’ . But none of them seemed to be interested in my idea. I was ‘’’down/frustrated at first’’’ but ‘’’I told myself not to give up’’’. Shortly after that, I realized that my invitation was just for a few people and I literally did not clarify my idea for them. Next time, I came up with a different ‘’’approach hay hơn vì mình muốn giới thiệu ý kiến cho người khác/ way cũng ok’’’ which was posting my ideas on social websites as well as texting all of my friends. ‘’’It came as surprise to me that there were still people having the same idea- câu này lấy câu tớ sửa đi’’’. Now, I eventually had my own team. After all, speaking from my above experience, I would have failed if I had ‘’’not pushed myself strong enough’’’ to pursue my target.

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Success is the ability to go from one failure to one another with no loss of enthusiasm” - said Sir Winston Churchill. Not only is it my favorite saying, I also gain a valuable experience. Anyone might not reach their goals by not showing sufficient enthusiasm. You are considered as a loser once you are incapable of getting over failure. However, if you aim at something, strive for it, light at the tunnel will be visible for you. From my case, I wanted to set up a volunteer team then asked my friends whether they would like to join or not and still, none of them seemed to be interested in my idea. Shortly after that, I realized that my invitation was just for a few people and I literally did not clarify my idea for them. Next time, I came up with a different approach which was posting my idea on social websites as well as texting all of my friends. I astonished upon figuring out that a lot of people shared the same idea with me. Now, I eventually had my own team. After all, speaking from my above experience, I would have failed if I had not been enthusiastic enough to pursue my target.

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