Bạn nên nêu lý do vì sao bỏ việc đang làm mà chọn việc này, đừng nói là vì tiền lương nhiều hơn, có thể nói là. I would like to continue my education in HCMC but I am working in Long An, it would be easier for me to take courses at night time if I live and work in HCMC…. I would like to apply for the position you advertised on …. I graduated from…….(tên trường bạn thì bạn tự chịu trách nhiệm nhé) in 2006, I have been working (không viết tắt khi xin việc) in a manufacturing company for 5 years and I have a great experience working in a purchasing position since August 2011 as clearly stated in my attached CV. I look forward to an opportunity to present my qualification in an interview. I am currently working, so please give me couple days before an interview. As an enthusiamand hard working person, I believe that I can meet the requirement of the position. I hope to hear from you soon and have a chance to work with your company for a long time.

I would like to apply for the job that you advertise on 24h.com.vn

I graduated from the College of Technology Industrial and Management as Foreign Trade since 2006. I've been working in a manufacturing company for 5 years and I have experience working in purchasing since 08/2011. Please find more details in my attachement. I look forward to discussing any opportunities which may be suitable at an interview with you. My current company is in LongAn province, so please kindly advice me a day before interview day. As an enthusiasm person and hard working, I believie that I'll give you a satisfaction. I hope to hearing from you soon and have chance to close your company for a long time.

Thư này ngắn thôi vì đã nói cụ thể trong CV rồi. Có ý tưởng nào khác PC giúp mình luôn nhé. Thanks a lot ^ ^