Thank you for your encouragement, I received IELTS result last week. I am sending you its score to seek your acceptance to start the Financial Planning course in May 2011 without taking ….. As I mentioned ( nếu là trao đổi với người này qua email trước đó thì viết tiếp IN PREVIOUS EMAIL(S), còn nếu bạn ko muốn nhấn mạnh đã trao đổi qua phương tiện nào thì dùng BEFORE), While waiting for my visa, I will keep improving my English in order to facilitate my study in Toronto. Please advise on my case and I would be grateful if I could receive your letter by May 2011. Highly appreciate your kind assistance. ..

Thank for your incentive, I got 6.0 Ielts the last week. I send you my Ielts score in hoping I will have your acceptance to start the Financial Planning course in May 2011 without taking Assessment Test in Centennial College. As I tell you, in waiting my Visa, I continue to improve my English and I am sure that when I come to Toronto in May, my english is enough to help me start my course without too much difficult.

Please tell me your opinion. And if I can get your offer letter to start my course in May 2011, it will be a big happiness for me in the new year.